寫作練習：My Trip
I rarely go abroad. I have been to some Asia countries. I have been to Singapore, Japan, Korea and China. My favourite country is Japan. There are many cities in Japan. But my favourite one is Kanazawa. It is so beautiful that I want to live there forever.
I have been to Kanazawa 8 years ago. That place was awesome. It’s not located in the city. Kanazawa was in the countryside. They have a beautiful castle and garden. Japanese called it 兼六園. if you visit there in the spring, the tree will be green. In winter, the weather will be cold. They are snowing everywhere. Besides the garden, the castle was fantasy, too. The wall was clean and historical.
After we visited the Attractions. We ate food in the market. We ate fried prawns and rice. The prawns were so delicious there. After we finished the meal. We went to the tea shop. They give us green tea and matcha ice cream. The green tea was light and the ice cream was sweaty. They are perfect snacks for fried prawn rice.
After the pandemic, I will go abroad again. I have been learning English for many years but I have never go to an English-speaking country. I hope I can go there by myself. Next year, It will be my first time planning a trip by myself. I will learn lots of things than before. Now, plane ticket is expensive. I hope it can be cheaper next year.
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I rarely go abroad. I have been to some Asian countries. I have been to Singapore, Japan, Korea and China. My favourite country is Japan. There are many cities in Japan. But my favourite one is Kanazawa. It is so beautiful. I want to live there forever.
I have been to Kanazawa 8 years ago. That place was awesome. It’s not located in the city. Kanazawa was in the countryside. They have a beautiful castle and garden. Japanese called it 兼六園. If you visit there in the Spring, the trees would be green. In Winter, the weather would be cold. It would snow everywhere. Besides the garden, the castle was fantastic, too. The wall was clean and historical.
After we visited the attractions. We ate food at the fish market. We ate fried prawns and rice. The prawns were so delicious there. After we finished the meal, we hit the streets. We went to the tea shop. They gave us green tea and matcha ice cream. The green tea was light and the ice cream was sweet. They were perfect snacks for fried prawn rice.
After the pandemic, I will go abroad again. I have been learning English for many years but I have never been to an English-speaking country. I hope I can go there alone. Next year, It will be my first time planning a trip by myself. I will learn lots more things than before. Plane tickets have become expensive, I hope they will be cheaper next year.
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